I drew me a comic.

[luckykaa]

I felt in the mood for drawing.

Hope you like it.  Go easy on me.  It's my first strip I ever posted online.  Actually, that's not totally true.  Physfighter is, but this is the first one that I've drawn.

It was just buzzing around in my head and I had to draw it to make room for new ideas. 

'm convinced that the idea's good, but I still think that last frame could be made funnier.  If anyone can improve on my dialogue, I'm open to suggestions.

Comments

[ghostpaw.livejournal.com]

I think it needs a pingyer ending too. Maybe you should make more of the rather camp bitchyness that happened in the last couple of episodes of the last series - "The Daleks have no concept of elegance" "Yeah we noticed" "Ooh get you!" etc.

Yeah. Gay Darleks and Cybermen. It's the way forward. Now that *would* scare the Doctor >:)

[luckykaa.livejournal.com]

Well, I think the idea is right. It just needs to be made more so. I mean, this is cute, bizarre and unexpected. I just want to make it a little more bizarre. A gay cyberman would do the job, but I can't think of the dialogue.

The "no concept of elegance" gives me an idea for another strip. I'll get around to that sometime.